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Wednesday 31 August 2011

Lee and Law



Once upon a time,there lived 2 fighters called Law and Lee.They entered a fighting ring for legends.Lee's, dad tried to enter by tapping in,
but he could not because he was not tagged.Law was fighting very well but Lee won because his dad believed in him.
So that night , Law ran away from his career and hid his identity.
 





2 comments:

  1. Well done for highlighting the verbs you used in your story.

    Next time you read, you might like to look for even more interesting verbs to use and keep adding them in to the writing you do!

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  2. This story is cool. Will Law ever return?

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